By Bryan
Green peas on flat spoon
Rolling lazily around
above the soup bowl
An eye-patched man comes
ill tidings he brings under
a flourescent sky
Guarding the deep bowl
I stand with scabbard to fight
Alas I'm run through
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2 comments:
Corn costs a buccaneer? GROAN!!!
Nice action sequence - didn't realize it was possible to have a pirate fight scene so succinctly in haiku form!
Genuine Haiku-ity! It felt like a real Haiku, not just the right number of syllables - well done!
"Rolling lazily around" - the line actually sounds like what it is - brilliant.
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